更新時(shí)間：2021-06-27 09:50:33作者：admin2
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I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.
However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
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審題是作文的第一要素，本文的審題準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。無(wú)論是要點(diǎn)的把握還是結(jié)構(gòu)的組織都證明了這一點(diǎn)。本文運(yùn)用多種復(fù)雜句式，整體看來(lái)是不錯(cuò)的。文中的一個(gè)復(fù)合句式顯示了作者的英語(yǔ)功底。其他出彩短語(yǔ)的使用也很地道，可以參看好句中的分析。
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好詞1.advantage n.優(yōu)點(diǎn)2.be familiar with，對(duì)某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.氣氛
好句1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.
我更喜歡采用雙語(yǔ)教學(xué)，其優(yōu)點(diǎn)是可以更好地理解老師的話(huà)。
好處：定語(yǔ)從句很好地組織了復(fù)雜句，同時(shí)prefer等詞組的使用很地道。
2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
那些希望英語(yǔ)授課的學(xué)生們可能會(huì)失望了。
好處：定語(yǔ)從句和wish to do的使用。